Looking for a writer to rewrite my story[medieval] [Psychological] [Action] Thread

I'm looking for someone to redo my story. I think it lacks a few features like my wanting it to be psychologically confusing but without losing the Action part of it. I also want it to be emotional that way it impacts the players more. I will PM my chosen writer the story so far.

Importance of each aspect of the Story

Higher is Better

1.) Emotional

2.) Action

3.) Psychologically Confusing

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I'm interested in taking a look and seeing where I can help. While you're wants could make a good narrative, without a small summary or synopsis it's hard to give solid advice. I do understand how hard it can be to summarize a story you're working on. So if you want me to take a look I'd be more than happy to.

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Although this post does not give any information about the story, but it seems that you want to add some depth into your story/game. That would be better if we knew which genre you are making story for.

It's nice to see writers want to have their story to not be told as simple as a just-action or just-anything-else story. I'm willing to have a look at your story and help you if you want.

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